Creative Nonfiction Essay
Through a series of scenes you should use narrative writing to show your experience over the past month. You may focus on one particular event or story or you could focus on a particular theme that connects multiple events. http://www.sabatinomangini.com/uploads/4/5/9/6/4596832/this_i_wonder_assignment_sheet.pdf
Drinking Under the Influence
Young people shouldn’t drink under the influence, because you never know what might happen. Anything can happen like a cause of death, a real bad accident. Never let anyone peer pressure you to do anything. If you decide to drink under the influence, you will see all the consequences you will have to face if you don’t make it out safe.
One night the girls decided to go out. They wanted to attend a party they heard about on Twitter. The party was free until it got shut down. Everyone was invited to the party. The party started at 9 o’clock. Hearing about the party got the girls excited, so they decided to go to the mall and find some sexy outfits.
The girls are at the mall shopping for their outfits for tonight. Tracy decided to wear this tight fitted black dress, with some red heels. Cyn wanted to wear a crop top with a mini skirt. Erica decided to wear a dress also but couldn’t think of the shoes she wanted to wear. So all the girls found there outfit, and started to head back home to get ready for the party.
Everyone is now home getting dress, it’s about eight o clock. You hear loud music playing, and see you everyone just moving around like wild animals. Tracy is doing her makeup, Erica is in the shower and Cyn is doing her hair. So far everything is going great with good timing. It was about time to get ready and leave. Then Cyn took a shot of alcohol and passed it around the circle.
The girls are in the car blasting music, dancing, on their way to the party. When they pulled up to the party all you seen was a lot of people outside, So we wasn’t sure where the party was. Some random boy pointed us in the direction of the party. We all walked in and saw colorful lights flashing with a strip pole in the middle. People were drinking and dancing all over. It was a lot of people in the party, it was so packed people could barely move.
Next some girl came around with a glass container, giving out some type of drink she made. The drink was very tasty and fruity. As of right now the party is still going and it’s about twelve o clock. There are people still dancing, drinking and doing whatever. Cyn told everybody in the group that the party was popping and she didn’t want to leave yet. Since that we all decided to stay for a couple more hours.
So finally when they decided to leave things just started going. Maybe because we were all under the influence. We went to the Wawa that was around the corner from the party so we could get something to eat. Everybody got out the car except Cyn and Tracy. Not even ten before we came out the store. All we saw was the car moving into the tree with door open. While the car was moving Tracy was behind the stirring wheel and Cyn getting dragged by the car. Then all of a sudden blue and red lights start flashing. There were like 3 cops pulling, they took Cyn and Tracy. While everybody else got away, this was the worst night ever. Cyn got her license suspended and Tracy got a citation in the mail.
Drinking Under the Influence
Young people shouldn’t drink under the influence, because you never know what might happen. Anything can happen like a cause of death, a real bad accident. Never let anyone peer pressure you to do anything. If you decide to drink under the influence, you will see all the consequences you will have to face if you don’t make it out safe.
One night the girls decided to go out. They wanted to attend a party they heard about on Twitter. The party was free until it got shut down. Everyone was invited to the party. The party started at 9 o’clock. Hearing about the party got the girls excited, so they decided to go to the mall and find some sexy outfits.
The girls are at the mall shopping for their outfits for tonight. Tracy decided to wear this tight fitted black dress, with some red heels. Cyn wanted to wear a crop top with a mini skirt. Erica decided to wear a dress also but couldn’t think of the shoes she wanted to wear. So all the girls found there outfit, and started to head back home to get ready for the party.
Everyone is now home getting dress, it’s about eight o clock. You hear loud music playing, and see you everyone just moving around like wild animals. Tracy is doing her makeup, Erica is in the shower and Cyn is doing her hair. So far everything is going great with good timing. It was about time to get ready and leave. Then Cyn took a shot of alcohol and passed it around the circle.
The girls are in the car blasting music, dancing, on their way to the party. When they pulled up to the party all you seen was a lot of people outside, So we wasn’t sure where the party was. Some random boy pointed us in the direction of the party. We all walked in and saw colorful lights flashing with a strip pole in the middle. People were drinking and dancing all over. It was a lot of people in the party, it was so packed people could barely move.
Next some girl came around with a glass container, giving out some type of drink she made. The drink was very tasty and fruity. As of right now the party is still going and it’s about twelve o clock. There are people still dancing, drinking and doing whatever. Cyn told everybody in the group that the party was popping and she didn’t want to leave yet. Since that we all decided to stay for a couple more hours.
So finally when they decided to leave things just started going. Maybe because we were all under the influence. We went to the Wawa that was around the corner from the party so we could get something to eat. Everybody got out the car except Cyn and Tracy. Not even ten before we came out the store. All we saw was the car moving into the tree with door open. While the car was moving Tracy was behind the stirring wheel and Cyn getting dragged by the car. Then all of a sudden blue and red lights start flashing. There were like 3 cops pulling, they took Cyn and Tracy. While everybody else got away, this was the worst night ever. Cyn got her license suspended and Tracy got a citation in the mail.